Death Is Not a 5-Star Hotel by David Lohrey

That was it. I wasn’t able to be free,

wasn’t prepared to carry the load, not entirely.

I was too young. And nobody took up the slack.

Absolutely not, so I drifted away. I paddled away,

down to a less vibrant part of the river and dropped my line

where there were no fish.

 

This can happen. One is left to fish without bait.

The water is torn by passing boats. The noise scares

some, but not the piranha. They’re not so easily

fooled. They take the bait but not the hook. They bite with care.

They eat around the hook. And you wait in the black water

all day or for years, hoping for a break. You sit in a boat

that’s not moving. You sit in the shade with the jungle behind you.

 

You watch the toucan flying above. You whistle.

You wave and the people wave back. “I have friends.”

You wait. You watch. You look. You listen, with the piranha

churning beneath you. The water is not green or brown like mud.

The water is black like a samurai’s topknot or a hearse at an

Italian funeral. It reminds me of the entrance to the Baglioni

in Rome, only you won’t find a hotel like that where I am.

 

One learns to survive. The tiny flesh-eaters feast without anger.

Their desperation is instinctive. Their motivation is survival.

One is taught to prepare. My guide reminds me to stay alert.

Hemingway wanted to get things right. He had an obsession

with accurate observation. The imagination can create

distractions. He preferred despair to fantasy.

 

I am floating on water that is still. The sun doesn’t have much longer.

There are no stars in the sky, no moon in the river. The water

is black like an open grave. I can imagine the fury beneath. I can

feel the anticipation. It reminds me of Rothko’s Chapel. It has

no flowers. My guide laughs. We haven’t had a bite. We should have

made a move. Now it’s too late. Even the toucan stop flying.

David Lohrey’s plays have been produced in Switzerland, Canada, and Lithuania. His poems can be found at Expat Press, the Cardiff Review, The Drunken Llama and the New Orleans Review.  His fiction can be seen at Dodging the Rain, Terror House Magazine, and Literally Stories. Three new anthologies in 2019 include David’s work: Universal Oneness (India), Passionate Penholders (Singapore), and Suicide, A Collection of Poetry and Prose (UK). David’s first collection of poetry, Machiavelli’s Backyard, was published in 2017. His newest collection, Bluff City, will appear this fall, published by Terror House Press. He lives in Tokyo.

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